No Exit Ramp
windshield sky is rain-heavy gray
smeared to the horizon
I’m going 80mph passing trucks
on I-64 my sister
is on speaker phone
sobbing and
sobbing and
begging
for her life to make sense again
and
I can’t help her
because it never will and
relentless traffic is the only thing
keeping me grounded
from the jolt of my sister’s distress
she tells me
I feel like I left town and never came back
just enough awareness
to split us both down the middle
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Heartbreaking!
Dang, keenly felt work.
Beautiful description of that moment, a subtle moment you show rather than try to explain. I like it very much
Wow! Powerful!
I agree – this is powerful! And the title is perfect.
Poem works well with no punctuation — keeps us (and the speaker) suspended.
Wow. The shared pain in this is a real as the heavy sky, rain, and traffic. The helplessness so real. This is a poem to be read over and over to appreciate the nuances.
Beautiful and tragic, too.
Powerful.