Not a Hoot Nor a Holler
Walking my spaniel
at twilight–
down the hill, in back of
the house, the day lilies’
last gasps dangle
over one neighbor’s
stone embankment.
Not even the dog notices
the two owls flying
just a little above our heads–
only silence
on this slow humid evening,
I see their w i n g s p a n
one on top of the other,
almost touching–
dodging pine tree
branches.
The owls disappear
into a fog
of smoky green mist.
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especially love the title, the spacing or “w i n g s p a n,” and the detail about the lilies:
the day lilies’
last gasps dangle
over one neighbor’s
stone embankment.
Thank you Gaby! Enjoy all your poems! And, photographs—poets are visual artists in so many ways
There’s a feeling of endings in this, I think the wonderful work you’ve done describing the Lillies contributes to it, and the owls disappearing. Fitting poem for the last day. I’ve enjoyed reading your poems this month, Kim.
And, I yours! I just realized I wasn’t hitting reply bottom—so some my responses to you are in comment form
last gasps dangle,
there’s a line worth stealing
….I’ve enjoyed your poems
masters of the evocative
Jim—I have enjoyed your work so much over the years even if I didn’t comment on them all!
The title here is just perfect, and the way the poem takes us on a memorable walk with you. Very nicely done!
Just beautiful image and love the title!
Lovely images!
A gorgeous and complete scene and form–enjoyed your work this month!
Thanks do much fellow poet!
Thanks fellow poet!
There is such drama and visual satisfaction reading this poem. I love the ending…so beautifully written.
Thanks Anne—your comments are appreciated. Loved your poems this year!