Not Without Struggle
We write, then revise.
We ponder over the option
of words, trying to make
the picture perfect choice.
Most importantly, we edit.
We can fix all errors easily
enough. In the real world,
mistakes are not mended
that effortlessly. A shame.
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It would be nice if they could be. Nice comparison.
I especially like the addition of “that effortlessly” and the title
Thank you both!
Yes, not without struggle….. I’m with Jenn, I like the comparison in this one!
In the real world,
mistakes are not mended
that effortlessly.
True, true.
On point! Great poem!
So true. Great poem, that turn there
Thank you all!