Obituary
A brilliant synopsis of my month’s work
A peek through the keyhole of my colossal plan
My nephew died today
Not today, I found out today
He lay two days dead
Til his sister found him
Today yesterday
He had no chance in his life
Where the Midwest ends
His dad a gutter drunk selling used cars
His mom hebephrenic
Truly an organic dysfunction
We tried to help once and visited unannounced
Dad was long gone away to another
Nothing had been removed from the house
In two years nothing
We moved and brought them
Another feeble temporary attempt to help
But they moved out, then sneaked away
Back to their familiar hell
Difficult to grow up and fit in with
Zero dad and crazy mom and a missing uncle too
And Marfan Syndrome
So tall with heart so bad
He couldn’t carry a laptop
I heard he had been doing well in rehab
From someone who tried harder than me
Obvious now not well enough
I will say nothing more but
Refer you to the last verse
of my poem
Manifesto Pt. 5
FUG
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This defies comment, but I am blown away.
So sorry for a broken life and the futility of trying to help. Brave poem
“From someone who tried harder than me” is a good sharing. This kind of eulogy speaks for many of us. I appreciate the context of the first stanza.
I echo what Gaby Bedetti says. I really enjoy your deprecation of CW… and of yourself. Your deadpan humor comes through. What a great exercise this has been and I’m really proud of
OW W
On this one I will echo what Gaby Bedetti says. I really enjoy your deprecation of CW… and of yourself. Your deadpan humor comes through. What a great exercise this month has been and I’m really proud of
OWW’s contribution.
Typos mypos
Very sad.
Steve. I am crushed for you.