Ocean
I expected a puddle
but I discovered an ocean
when I met you.
Your current shifts without warning,
But your tides are cyclical, steadfast.
You read true when a storm brews,
when a quiet day greets the horizon,
when a tectonic plate shifts,
And yet, I understand so little of you.
The depths unknown to human touch keep me guessing
because I know the deeper I dive,
the surface’s weight grows deadly,
crushing anything that ventures too far.
Life swims through you as I wade safely,
ankle-deep and unaware.
Sometimes your words become waves;
They often break gently when we disagree.
Sometimes the swells rise with might
and pummel the retreating shoreline without intent to harm.
The ocean (you) do not know their might.
I can feel the riptide pull the sand beneath my feet as the waves retreat,
I steady myself while the water rushes back;
Gathering itself to unfold and repeat the motion in an endless loop.
You are wondrous, mysterious, and familiar.
I long to return to you.
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Wonderful and soothing.
Thank you, wendyjett! : )
Richly developed metaphor
Thank you, Gaby. : )
“I expected a puddle
but I discovered an ocean
when I met you.”
Thank the gods we don’t get what we expect or deserve!
Loved every bit of this, H. Especially this stanza:
“The depths unknown to human touch keep me guessing
because I know the deeper I dive,
the surface’s weight grows deadly,
crushing anything that ventures too far.”
Felt that!
What a lovely poem! Great word usage to fit the levels of meaning. “You are wondrous, mysterious, and familiar.”
Thank you, Joseph and Sylvia! I sincerely appreciate your kind words.
It’s funny, you both select lines that I planned to cut. Glad I kept them. : )
I live in Kentucky but my heart is on the beach and the love I once had still lives there. The first walk I took along that beach alone spoke to me as I walked along and the surf rolled across my feet and a light wind whirled sand around me welcoming me home.. and then I met her… but she is now lost in the waves… you gave me the time to refresh a memory I cherish,,, Thank you
Oh, wow. Thank you for sharing your story, Mr. Sexton. I am honored that my writing resonated with you. ♥️