of David
nothing
makes
me still
refreshes
the path
i
walk
I fear
th e
rod
for
my enemies
overflow
my
house
Erasure of Psalm 23
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Nice wander about the page, love that I can connect words several different ways.
Thanks Bernard! My intent was to read right to left in standard order, but not that you have called it out, I also see several other wandering paths!
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Brilliant, David!
Thanks again Shaun!
Nice erasure! Makes me want to go back and read the source text
I like how the source text is intrinsically linked to the final poem despite not appearing itself. Like a built in contrast.