Old Country Songs
They are tinnitus, like ice in bourbon, tickling rhythm with rhyme.
Old country songs, about a Lineman and Galveston.
They are almost a memory, the Gulf coast, a tire-swing,
tar covered heels and his white Coastie slacks and coat.
They get in front of work,
they get in front of life,
dragging out what lingers in darkness
between the sun and the sea.
They ring like conch shells
I heldup to my ear.
It’s been so long that I can’t
remember what I’m listening to.
Like remembering would silence
the tin sound of my transistor radio.
Their lyrics, barely a memory. I strain
to hear them, just once more, before
they become indistinguishable
from that incessant roar.
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I enjoyed this.
“It’s been so long I can’t remember what I’m listening to”
stirred me.
Feels like an old photograph infused with music and perhaps a first love. I picture you half dreaming in a chair in silence. Dredging up a static-filled memory like someone trying to find a station on a radio.
I have to say after reading your comment, I want to revise the poem again to make it just that. That is a lovely response and just what I was hoping to evoke.
Those songs by Jimmy Webb as performed by Glen Campbell are two of my all-time favorites. Not sure I think of them as “country” songs in the classic sense, but it doesn’t matter. Thanks for inspiring me to listen to them again.
I listen got glen often.
Ahh, love this. the second stanza is wonderful
Thank you!
You got me with ice In bourbon, tickling rhythm with rhyme!
Thank you! I had to rework that line. You comment means a lot.
And didn’t things sound different from a transistor radio?
Quite! Static included.
Love it! The 2nd stanza was really moving to me- sort of a permeating of the rhythm of living.
Thanks. See you Sunday?