Old Lady, Part 3
It was during one Sunday dinner,
family gathered around the table
of my mother’s sunny kitchen,
that we heard an ambulance wail
up the drive to that ramshackle
square of a house next door.
At first we tried to mind
our own business, eat our meat
and gravy, bread and butter,
but eventually we looked
out the window, saw the white
mashed potato lump of a body
bag wheeled out on a stretcher
and the two big boys, both alive,
bulging from the front door frame
behind it, faces flushed and full
of grief, followed by a tuck-tailed
pair of dejected-looking dogs.
The witch was dead. I couldn’t eat.
My stomach was full of knots.
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Chelsie there is no desire to eat breakfast.
Thank you. This was an effective poem.
enjoyed this story’s
unexpected turn..
I really like the procession that follows her out the door, big boys and dejected dogs. Wonderful images.
I too was surprised by her turning it our to be a “witch.” love those dogs
This witch has quite a place in your imagination, Chelsie! Bless her heart. May she rest in peace.
Wow, what a wrenching and evocative poem.
Went back and read
Old Lady I & II for context
These poems are great picture
of the flights of childhood.
Great descriptions. The poem has darkness but also hian ending that evokes redemption.
“Mashed potato lump of a body, ” that captures the moment. “The witch,” apparently not someone you cared for. Still, you are physically conflicted by the sight of what has happened. Great poem, Chelsie; there’s so much going on.
She was just an old lady that lived next door to me as a child. I thought she was a witch and was scared of her, but in reality I’m sure she was completely harmless!