OMG So Many Opinions
I want to make comments
nice rhyme
vivid images
I can taste the sky
but know I mustn’t
you see it’s fresh in my memory
the jaw-dropping moment
when someone stated
my opinion was irrelevant
I shut up
swallowed
what I thought
was allowed
in that safe space
I felt embarrassed
when with the group
whose ears were privvy
to that life changing sentence
I thought of suicide
I dwelled obsessed
even confessed
my twisted thoughts
to a few close peers
then I realized words
like bullets can kill
if one gives power
to another person’s
opinion
I’m just sad
that red white and blue
gun
in this land of freedom
put an end
to one of the best
workshop groups
I’ve been in
I miss y’all
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A very brave poem. “…words can kill if one gives power to another person’s opinion.” The trick is not giving them power. Just like rejections. Someone once said something about wallpapering your room with them. I’ve only got one wall left to go.
Oh dear. This is very upsetting. I’m so sorry this happened to you, Catherine. It should never have happened. I agree with your realization near the end of the poem. And the ending is heartbreaking.
Responses to our work are often two sides of a coin, aren’t they? I’m sorry this happened, but I am overjoyed that you can write about it and move on. Your work always deserves an audience!
It makes me sad to hear this happened to you.