Opening
They look stubborn. It seems as though
the peonies on my kitchen counter
have not been notified it is their job to bloom
and fill my life with joy.
Green-leafed stalks with the bulb on top, but pink.
Like artichokes gone wild.
I know the feeling of being taunted, and this is it.
In stomps the preteen from his neighborhood jaunts.
He isn’t mad, he just stomps. I think his bones
have grown so fast he can’t keep up with them.
I watch him at the refrigerator with the milk,
at the snack cabinet with the beef jerky.
He puts an apple in his pocket and I remember
when the only thing he would eat was goldfish
and avocados. I remember telling myself
he’ll grow out of it,
and hoping I was right.
He waves at me. We’re on friendly terms.
I watch him walk out the door then turn
myself again, to a flower in full bloom.
Three days of watching and the magic happens
when I’m distracted.
Maybe it’s always that way.
Maybe everything needs to be left alone to blossom.
16 thoughts on "Opening"
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Nice! Very well-constructed poem.
Thank you!
An upstart and growing, avocado eating boy, a peony that looks like artichoke blooming, what a lovely juxtaposition of personages. The heart in this poem is glowing.
That’s beautiful, thank you!
This is a good poem! I like how you leap from the peonies to the stomping preteen. There’s so much truth and grace in the poem but it’s an everyday kind of truth — very accessible.
I’m so glad it comes across, thank you!
Beautiful poem from beginning to end. I love how you assign jobs to the peonies! Enjoyed this so much.
I’m so glad Sylvia, thank you!
I really enjoy the perspective of just letting things be, nice poem!
Thank you!
This tugged at my chest and made me think of my nephew
I’m glad it did elicit that feeling and thought
Hi Arwen! Love this. You know what? I’d totally cut the last 2 stanzas. On my computer, I read through “bloomed” and was so surprised at that turn… that the rest unfolded in my head so naturally and sweetly. It was only when I scrolled that I realized there was a little more. Just an idea! .. I love the description of the teenager – the stomping, the bones imagery, the way he grabs the food, it’s all so classic and so perfect against the peony blooming. Well done!
Hey Em! I’m just seeing this – thank you for that suggestion – I like it! Not everything needs to be said!
I love how this juxtaposition works–the implication that the awkward preteen blooms like a peony!
Thank you!