Overheard at the hair salon
The pain is a ten, but every time
I feel it I say, There’s that blue
five again. Sometimes it shoots
down my arm like a river
branching into my hand.
And my shoulder grates
like gravel. I can picture a plate
with holes in it, grinding
and catching as it moves.
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grates, gravel, grinding – these hard sounds help make this poem really evocative
The blue five caught my ear, but when I heard all that “gr” I had to excuse myself to the bathroom to jot it all down before I forgot. Thanks for commenting!
. . . a found poem?
A salon is a super place for them.
Bruce Florence
Yes, an audio found poem. I took my mother to have her hair done, which allowed me to sit in the corner and take it all in. I plan to do that more often. 🙂 Thank you for commenting!
awesome piece. the hair salon is definitely a great place to pick up a poem…