Pachyderm
Bit off more
than I can chew. Unless, in
chewing, less
there is
to do. Jaw
clenched, mandibles
resolved. Bite
by bite the
elep
hant
dis
sol
ve
s.
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fascinating title and shape
I like your shaping of this poem and its message
Very well done! It would be to share with kids, they might appreciate poetry more.
For sure, I am considering making a series of shaped poems like this specifically aimed at kids
That’s a great idea. Very impressive work.
I love the shape of this explosive condense poem!