Palm Trees Near Venice Beach
Palm trees can root in sand,
their tough fronds dance
above the Boardwalk.
Restless, my son moves
with high hopes. He lands
a dream job as a comedy writer.
I look at technicolor photos
of pastel painted bicycles
& sweeping arcs of graffiti,
imagine him telling R-rated
jokes, cartooning in endless
sketchbooks, going to open mics.
Swirling wildfires sear & scorch
parts of Los Angeles. My lamb
doesn’t write or phone.
Ungovernable flames
shoot up the tall trees
like hot elevators.
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Timely, and what a great capture of a mother’s concern. “Ungovernable flames” is loaded. Nice one, Linda.
The tension builds well in this one.
This poem shows a great delicacy of “disaster” with the enjambed lines and moves with an urgent fluidity
Full story-telling
in your twinning twist.
I echo Shaun
The disaster
and the mother’s concern
unspoken and on fire.
Oh, and another tree. Nice!
The trees speak!
Hot elevators sweet Jesus!
love the sweetness of “My lamb”
A mother’s tender hope/worries. “My lamb” and “Ungovernable flames” show that range. Hope all is well!