Pantoum for a Sleepless Night
All the words have fled
From the caverns of my mind
Everything is silent now
I’ve left all thought behind
From the caverns of my mind
A mist begins to flow
I’ve left all thought behind
My baggage still in tow
A mist begins to flow
The wisps to coalesce
My baggage still in tow
I struggle to confess
The wisps to coalesce
Everything is silent now
I struggle to confess
All the words have fled
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good poem. good rhythm. pantoums are fun even when lacking Z’s. 😊
Hypnotic poem. I have read them.for years but have never attempted one — until now. You’ve inspired me to try.
Elegant placements !
Pro crafting.
I find a pantoum so difficult to write. You did a beautiful job.