Parietal
“Touch has a memory.”
– John Keats
We are what we touch
and yours
was so soft
I touched
so softly
the way
one might touch
a moth
with thought–
without
touching. I knew
I couldn’t
ever be
the same.
~ ~ ~
I recall
the way
each of my sons
preferred that
touch
at bed time.
The first, in one large circle,
nape of the neck
to base of the back,
and again, until
he was still
against my chest.
And then, my second,
like a brush, but coarsely,
dragging the nails, but gently,
from bottom to top,
top to bottom, then a shift
to the right, and repeat—
though he seldom fell
asleep.
And with both, a light
sweep from the temple
to the ear, from the ear
to the eye—til it closed,
til their chest rose
and fell
more deeply.
~ ~ ~
They, and You,
will never be
so small
again. So much
has and will
change. But
I’ve longed
for so long
to touch you
as you touched me—
to gather the gossamer
of wings, and light
a whisper
at your back—find myself,
there, as before, drawn within
visible but indelible ink,
saying,
Oh, there. There you are.
There you are.
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soft sonics at the beginning evoked something “gossamer/whisper(ing)” from the moment this began – and the image of the moth hit me before you mentioned it – the structure of the piece is a knock out – loved it
Thank you, Sir!
This is already one of my favorites I’ve ever read from you.
☺️ Good to see your face again, and thank you, Philip!
“Touch has a memory” and I will remember this one! Sweet way to start off the month!
Hello again! I’m glad!
That ending = 🔥🔥
I love the use of italics and the repetition a lot.
Thank you, Shaun! 💫
I love how your first line breaks the silence with tactile. And then how the enjambments tumble the lines forward in the patterns of touch.
<3 Thank you, Roberta.
And glad you felt that.
Wistful and pretty – a little sad but only in the best way.
Thank you, A.
One heading into high school…definitely a touch of sadness there, and otherwise. Sadness isn’t required reading for beauty, but I find a bit it often rides shotgun with the things and people we most cherish <3
Seems that way to me too!
“the way
one might touch
a moth
with thought–
without
touching. ”
Yes!!!
Always a delight to read your work. Thank you for sharing your magick with us.
You’re very welcome! Thank you, H.A. Looking forward to yours as well!
This brings thoughts of the joy I feel putting my son to sleep and cradling the warmth of his love. Thank you for sharing.
💙 Lucky to have one who is still a hugger 🙂
There’s so much I love about this poem. I like the idea of stretching it out and making it not unlike a long hug. Great concision. You knew what NOT to include. Very good work.
Thank you, Linda!
Growth—did not used to be my gift 😂
This is beautiful – what rich memories you have of those bedtime moments! Thanks for sharing.
💙 Thank you, ma’am.
“Visible but indelible ink”. A beautiful piece Joseph!
Thank ya, Bernie!
you should do a father/sons little chapbook.
Thank you, ma’am.
Not nearly enough at present, but maybe a goal soon 💙
Beautiful man.
Thank you 🙂
Enjoying reading you this year.
I love this so much!
Thank you, ma’am!