Part of Me
Part of me wants to go out
lie down in the grass
let the rain pelt me
totally absorb this world
while I’m still here.
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Part of me wants to go out
lie down in the grass
let the rain pelt me
totally absorb this world
while I’m still here.
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Palpable. Relatable.
I just love this!
Well, that’s beautiful Pat Owen
I think that sounds lovely! I agree.
Beautiful.
Beautiful and full of meaning.
I hope that part of you wins out one day this summer! You are sure to get a poem from it as well!
You’ve got my number
great image!
Very nice – the ending was a surprise!
Wonderful! A joyful feeling!
yep, do it!
Me too, although the other part of me hates getting wet. 😉
me too that’s the problem
Much felt. I love the concision and richness of this poem.