Pastoral Self Portrait as an Aging Woman
So, go ahead and thrash me
to an inch above the earth. How low
these dry stalks go, the seeds long
since dispersed after blooming ceased.
I’m not even considered
dormant. We’ll have to see if next
year a shoot greens from the old
roots. One day, I say I’m done,
but the next has me shivering
in the sunrise, my body wishing
like water in a spring. Fresh, clear,
certain I’ll run another year.
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A self-portrait in words that flow from inside…
Ellen – a shoot will green! This is lovely.
Thanks for sharing.
Thanks, Nancy.
“my body wishing
like water in a spring.” Yes!
I love the resilience
Very tight poem. I’m in from the very beginning. I love “my body wishing like water in a spring.”
Thank you!
That is my favorite line too – this whole poem speaks so powerfully to me
just an inch to go
before earth…
wonderful stuff.
Thanks for reading & commenting!
Love the title – Here’s to all the green shoots that arise!
Thanks, Sylvia.
This one seems in conversation with @Tom Hunley’s (and what many of us are feeling).
I thought that as I read Tom’s poem, too!
Captured how I feel many a day with this, Ellen:
One day, I say I’m done,
but the next has me shivering
in the sunrise, my body wishing
like water in a spring.
Thanks, Pam. Hope today you’re wishing like water.
I am…looking for more poems by you! Keep at it!
“Hope springs eternal…”
shivering
in the sunrise, my body wishing
like water in a spring
I get a sense of reaching, of extension, living going forward in dear hope. Loved this.
Dear hope. Yes. There’s this. Thank you
Thanks for reading and commenting, poet friends!
I love “greens” as a verb and “my body wishing / like water in a spring.” I also admire the density of this one, and the tone feels right for the subject.
Thanks, Tom.
Lovely, especially that ending stanza!
Thanks, Karen
this is not nature personified but a human naturalized
What a lovely comment!
Love this thought! And, yes, great images Ellen! “my body wishing / like water”
You captured the feeling that sneaks up on us.
A release of hope for anyone caught up in aging…and searching for that sunrise/wishing/water feeling on some morning to come.