Paterfamilias
I have known the art of work
drawn long and gray across my father’s face
as the jack arches and repetitions
of brick courses, soldiers and sailors alike,
lay grim reminders that no collar joint
connects sincerely the man and the monument.
No crack control saves, no cantilever holds,
no expansion anchor roots to satisfaction.
Though I have seen the sublime Victorian weave,
skillful Flemish bond, rolling caramel buttresses
at supernatural angles, dogtooth and crow stepping,
cathedraling into the branches of ancient Osage orange
and American elms. An art of work I was once
proud of and even teared up in saying so. But since,
I have grown to know he hated every second of it.
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wow!
Yes !!!! Wow.
The masonry vocabulary sets this just so strongly right.
And the twist with ” art of work ” is deft.
The ending seals the poem with the broken off couplet.
Great writing.
I agree with Coleman: the “art of work” and the specificity of your language and complexity of line cutting these complex/gorgeous technical terms with the movement into nature and “But since…” are so effectively done and grabbed me.
btw, your poem’s beginning, “I have known” reminds me of the repeated line in Eliot’s “Love Song”: “For I have known them all already, known them all”
I appreciate that Gabby. Really it owes a bit more to Robert Hayden.
This is a hell of poem. The ending surprises and the descriptive language elevates.
Whoa! Didn’t see that end coming.
Love:
drawn long and gray across my father’s face
no collar joint
connects sincerely the man and the monument.
Love the twist at the end!