Pecking Order
My squirrels gifted
me surprise sunflowers,
stalks asserting themselves
amongst the hosta & lavender,
gutters and gourds.
I call them tree rats,
but they are generous in their struggle.
Little limbs stretch to reach heights,
chittering heads on a swivel for the local hawks.
The avians only take.
Blueberries, blackberries,
anything the screeching elitest
monsters can get their hands on.
They soar easily, stealing treasures.
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love the image of a hawk roaming the ‘streets’ as ratcatcher..
I love the subtle alieration. Great poem.
love the contrast between the hard-working squirrels and the effortlessly successful birds, and how the tone favors the squirrels
Very nicely done – I like how the berries taken by the elitists are like jewels.
Clever!
Beautifully done!