Pendulum
When I was monk.
a boy to be a
I wanted
When you up.
get down only go
you can
Some days funk.
the world a vibrant
carries a
Other days luck.
eyes strain without
to smile
7 thoughts on "Pendulum"
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Love the poem and of course the form is awesome!
I really enjoyed this, surprising form!
What a cool effect! Sometimes experimenting with form can seem gimicky, but not this, not to me. Nice!
Love this, especially the third stanza!
So cool to read this way!
Like the way the form teaches us how to read it. Especially like the third stanza.
Yes! Like the form and the end rhyme.