Persephone at Cracker Barrel
Hell is a table by the window,
where the AC’s broke and the sun
bleeds syrup on orange-oiled wood.
He orders Uncle Herschel’s Favorite Breakfast.
Who eats a hamburg steak before 10:30,
medium eggs like jelly moons,
torched bacon brittle as old bones.
She eats grits—six steaming spoonfuls.
Thinks, stay.
Spring comes when Persephone slips out back
to smoke in the cramped employee bathroom,
by the dumpsters. She whispers dandelions
through asphalt. Just one drag—
Til Hades himself hollers from the kitchen door,
“Hon! Table seven needs some pomegranate tea.”
She grinds the blossom under her non-slip sole.
So what if the sky’s aching blue?
For months, the coffee’s kept fresh.
The music–not dryad, but flesh
against hot grease. Her & her lover.
Her mama searches every interstate exit
as the old men in checkered plaid and A-shirts
stare at cold coffee and weep
for the waitress. She stalks paper menu,
wet with maple and the steam
of something boiling.
On months the ice cubes stay whole,
Persephone calls from the pay phone
outside. Demeter comes in her van.
They leave with next shift on napkin,
six biscuits cradled in warm wax paper—
like a stolen kiss.
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I admit to laughing at Hades hollering by the kitchen door, love your contemporary setting for the myth, and wonder whether the poem was triggered by the recent Ashanti alert missing woman found yesterday
Thank you–I love the idea of Hades being a sort of assistant-manager type too. I was definitely intrigued by the alert yesterday!
Shaun, you’ve outdone yourself again. Mixing Myth with Cracker Barrel? Well, it’s just plain epic!!
Thank you, Rosemarie! I used to work at one years ago–and today somehow she ended up there!
So many good lines! Love it. Well done.
Thank you, Wendy!
Oh, this is awesome! Shaun, the way you transport the myth to modern-day is brilliant. I love that moment where the cigarette is clipped under the no-slip sole. So good!!!
Thank you! I was def thinking of old serving days when you could not catch a break! 😛
Oh, I know those. I was a waitress at a Friendly’s when I was 15, and I tended bar for a bit later on when I was an undergrad. Ugh. Relentless and thankless work. Great poem, Shaun!
Most hilarious Greek mythology poem I’ve ever read! This is truly hysterical in addition to being razor sharp. My hat’s off to you.
Thank you, Kevin!
Shaun, with all respect, this is the most epic poem you have shown this summer. It rocks.
Thank you, Manny! I appreciate you!
This is such an excellent blending of the Greek myth with distinct imagery from a mid-twentieth-century American diner. having worked in the food industry, I related to her in so many ways. The descriptions are so vivid, and I like how it all evolves from and is connected to that opening stanza.
An interesting synchronicity has occurred. I watched Thelma & Louise the other night, and the imagery of this poem/myth combo reflects some of the themes from the movie.
Thank you! I worked in food service for a few years and saw a whole lot of Thelmas and Louises there!
Seriously, how did you come up with this?! Cracker Barrel as the underworld is marvelous. A fantastic and entertaining re-telling.
Thank you! I just thought, what if Persephone were trapped at the Cracker Barrel and once that was kind of there, I pulled from all of the things I could remember about serving. 😛
Shaun, I could read this over and over and never stop marveling at the images, the humor, the mythology mix with today. I love it!
Thank you so much, Cathy!
You had me at the title and just rolled one through.
Loved “She whispers dandelions
through asphalt.” and so much more.
Thank you, Fanny!
Fantastic! The setting is beyond epic. I just can’t stop singing your praises. You’ve raised the level again.
I appreciate all your kind words, Linda! I really give credit to this month and everyone else for all the poems we share in June. It’s a source of energy!
I got the pomegranate tea reference. Cool. This is a tremendous poem, Shaun; you brought Greek mythology to a highway exit in Kentucky, and made it relevant to modern readers. So creative, so many micro details. Excellent work.
Thank you so much, Lee!
Holy Shit, Shaun.
I have to agree with Manny.
This is beyond epic and should be published…anywhere.
Funny enough, I read none of it as humor. At all. I can appreciate it for that, re-reading, but I got dark, gritty, American Gods vibes, alongside breathtaking phrases and images. The mixture of her smoking and “She breathes dandelions/ through asphalt” was far far worth coming here all by itself.
Had to come back and up the ante:
This is more than my favorite of yours this pomo. This is my favorite OF pomo 25. And may be seriously up there on my favorites from Ever Pomo.
Shew, thank you so much, Joseph! I do love that American Gods vibe–some of my earliest writing memories were retelling myths.
Delightful! Every line, every image. What a world you’ve painted here. . . .
Thank you so much, Michele!
You had me with the title. So imaginative and funny.
Thank you, Karen! It’s like, where else would she be? 😛
I agree with everyone here regarding the setting (and you’ve detailed it so well), Shaun. I appreciate the narrative structure beginning with and order to exiting with leftover biscuits and also the combination of high and low culture. This poem appeals to a huge audience. I’ve done some weeping of my own for more coffee–those miniature cups are ridiculous.
Haha that is so true about the coffee, but at least there’s free refills! Thank you, Nettie!
Creative and compelling storytelling. Great imagery.
Thank you, Virginia!
I always love a myth retelling, and this here is quite creative. It feels so real when compared to modernized versions yet still brimming with all the traditional details (the dandelion for spring, the shackle of the pomegranates, the time with Demeter). And there are so many wonderful lines: the sun bleeding syrup and the ending of the stolen kiss. Masterfully done, truly.
Thank you so much, Maira! I love a myth retold or history brought to current times, too!
I agree with all the good thoughts stated before mine.
I bow to the splendor wrought here and use one of your words, Shaun, to state my overall thoughts and feelings (only I will yell it) SHEW!
When I saw the title, I thought, of course Persephone would be at Cracker Barrel….and of course Hell would be at a table “where the AC’s broke and the sun/bleeds syrup on orange-oiled wood.” and of course Hades himself hollers…/“Hon! Table seven needs some pomegranate tea.” “…..
My favorite of all my favorite lines here:
“six biscuits cradled in warm wax paper—
like a stolen kiss.”
Thank you, Pam! I honestly try to end up leaving with as much bread as I can when I go out to eat!
The mixing of the mundane with the mythological is fantastic. You’re so good at it, and your word choice is always so fresh. I’m kinda jealous!
Thank you so much, Chelsie!
You mastered this one! Funny and loved the braiding of reality and mythology!
Thank you, Linda!
Shaun. SO MUCH FUN to read this poem.
You don’t myth at all. You hit the mark 🙂
Thank you, Bud! 😂
Shaun, you’re a master of mythology, set in the nitty-gritty of life!
This poem made me gasp with delight from reading it!. Your imagery was so vivid and both deep and in your face at the same time…I loved it all. How can you not love a poem that starts with “Hell is a table by the window,..and ends with “…six biscuits cradled in warm wax paper—
like a stolen kiss.”…
Thank you for this wonderful writing which made me see things differently!
I’m late to the party, but this is definitely a winner!
She whispers dandelions
through asphalt – love!
You are absolutely on fire this year!