Photo Taken by a Four-Year-Old
He cuts off our heads
just above the eyes
but it’s the best we can expect
from clumsy little hands.
We’re smiling from high,
Natural Bridge, new love, sleeping
toddler strapped to my back,
dark clouds crowding
into the frame, bumping
shoulders in the background.
No capture of the next moment,
when the first drops plummet,
burst and splatter on our shoulders,
and we start down, hopeful
to make it back to the trailhead
before it starts to pour.
But we get caught
by the cloudburst. My oldest
son squeals and reaches
for the sure grip of your hand
to keep him from falling
down slippery rocks in the deluge.
You hoist him onto your hip.
The baby whimpers in my ear
from beneath the sodden hood
of his jacket as you guide us
all to shelter, shadow
of a craggy ledge where we’ll wait
for the worst to pass, soaked
clothes suctioned to our bodies
like we all dove headlong
into a swimming pool.
Kids calmed now, poking at mud
puddles with a stick,
I watch the steady drip
from the brim of your hat.
You start to apologize
for bringing us here, showers
in the forecast and all, claim
it’s your fault, a bad idea.
But I shake my head, send rivers
flowing from the ends of my hair.
This rain is so warm,
and I’m laughing.
16 thoughts on "Photo Taken by a Four-Year-Old"
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Wonderful!!!!!!!
I can see the whole thing.
Just wonderful.
What a great memory and moment. It’s so nice to read a happy love poem from you. Well-deserved.
What an emotional and effecting conclusion to this vivid poem
the sweetness of the laughter
Love this, I can see the whole scene- and feel all that love.
Such a delightful poem, Chelsie! La dolce vita.
“We’re smiling from high, / Natural Bridge”: I’m trying to figure out where the fou-year old is standing as he takes the picture, can you believe, retroactively worried about his footing. I love the poem, too, also because we’ve climbed with family and friends and rain and mountain laurel. One of my favorite memories, too
Yes, yes, I can believe! Hiking with kids is terrifying. Don’t worry, I’m the helicopter-safety-patrol mother when there is any sort of ledge or drop!
I love it all but I especially love this verse:
Kids calmed now, poking at mud
puddles with a stick,
I watch the steady drip
from the brim of your hat.
My eye keeps returning to “I watch the steady drip/ from the brim of your hat.” That intimacy lets me step into this poem.
A beautiful narrative, done with the unique perspective of mother and companion…love: soaked/clothes suctioned to our bodies” Anyone who’s been caught in rain on a trail gets that part!
Such a beautiful moment of love and mothering captured in words.
The laugh at the end is so powerful!
Beautiful image of your hike! Loved it!
Beautiful image! And perfect title.
You had me at “He cuts off our heads”! What a fun adventure you took us on!