Pine Mountain Cemetery II
Pine Mountain Cemetery
Old Ben
His three corner stone echoes
Hats worn by fellow soldiers
Fightin’ a war way back, ‘fore memory
Today can capture the worst of it.
Tall, too, way more than most.
Lived ten by ten, such a stretch.
Lanky, pants just to raw ankle
Bones. Strong, way I hear it
No man in these here parts could
Hold a candle to what he could lift.
Never went in the mines, proud
He was, so let the earth keep
Him in what little he needed.
Smart, oh he knew things way
Beyond the ken of us shorter men.
Planted trees, mostly apple, peach
Plum, paw paw. Kept his clan’s
Sweet tooth washed in pure honey.
Talked a rabbit into his stew slick
As you might want to see or tell.
Mr. Ben, you rest good now. Likes
Of you won’t never walk again in a world
Gone crazy seekin’ room and the peace
You had and kept and offered back
To us ’uns too dull to grab the gift.
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You just bring “Old Ben” to life and make me wish I had known him. What a storyteller you are, Bruce! Love this poem!
love, love, love, the diction, the syntax, the idioms
“Talked a rabbit into his stew slick
As you might want to see or tell.”
One of many great lines – Bruce
you are ‘the’ story teller. I love this story and
can see ‘Old Ben.’
“Kept his clan’s
Sweet tooth washed in pure honey.”
So much in so few words. Thank you.
Thank you all, you keep me at it.
This was so well done, as if it came from then. I’m looking forward to this series.