Pining
O table-top heliotrope!
Plucked and vased
you pine—like Clytie
for her Helios—drooping
fading, foundering, withering
giving up like we do.
When love’s gaze decays
we, too, shrivel, quiver, gasp
sputter, collapse, unravel.
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Yes!–
O table-top heliotrope!
Plucked and vased
you pine—like Clytie
for her Helios—drooping
fading, foundering, withering
Wonderful! Love the comparison. 💚
I give a chef’s kiss to the language in this poem, it makes me want to read this over and over again! It’s been wonderful reading your poems. Until next year!
Your images are outstanding.
Wonderful verbs!
Wow!! This one’s a star! LOVE the sounds, images, and emotion–just perfect!
I love what you have captured visually and metaphorically
Nancy, just beautiful! Full of life, myth, and imagery. So glad I got to read your work again!
The sounds here are just gorgeous and pulsing with pine.