Poem: an Abstract
With heavy influence from “The Hollow Men” and “MacBeth,” and with all due respect to T.S. Eliot and William Shakespeare (please don’t haunt me!)
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The Moving Finger writes; and, having writ,
Shall lure it back to cancel half a Line,
Nor all thy Tears wash out a Word of it.
-Omar Khayyám
We are the wounded men
We are the haunted men
Standing apart we keep it all together
Hearts filled with anger. Alas!
Our thoughts when
They find us alone
Are hot and agitated
As a spark in dry grass
or memories cutting glass
And diamonds
Mass without frame, sound without noise,
Pent up force, motion without intention;
Those who are also chased
With hungry eyes, by life’s tempting vices
Consider us – if at all – as fevered
Angry souls, and
As the wounded men
The haunted men.
Double double toil and trouble
Passion burn and fire bubble
Bitter herbs make fevers cool
We soak them in the deepest pool
She kneels beside her fire glow
Hair blowing in the wind, there is no
Sound but the crackle in the heat
She boils the water in the stone
And mixes into paste her own
Concoction of the bitter, and the sweet
He’s lying close beside so she can see him
in his fever dream he cries
“Get back you fiend, or you’ll be beat!”
She puts the potion in his hand
His agitation stirs but then
He drinks it, a necessary feat.
His brow bursts into sweat he finds
His paper once again and takes to
writing. The magic is complete
“Hope is the thing with Feathers
Hope is the thing
Hope is
Hope is the
Avoiding the trouble that craves us
Hope is a dream that enslaves us
This is how poetry saves us
Not with a burst, but a glimmer.”
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Hope is the thing with Feathers – Emily Dickinson
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The best poem I have read in some time… You own it. You share it with words from great writers. I hate to make one suggestion, however, about the witches’ brew, but you will find it. Thanks for giving us this fine work…
mt poet – this is quite a compliment, thank you. I don’t mind the suggestion. Something about that part is nagging at me. Also the formatting difference between my phone and my laptop is crazy-making lol. Thank you for reading and your response
there’s friendship deep in this one. cures for the wounded. blossoming forth into creation in writing. loved… hope is the avoiding the trouble that craves us. personification of trouble. love the rhythms, the repetition, it’s like a witches’ canticle – but the best kind of witch. by the way, mentions of the Scottish play only bring 30 years of accursed misfortune if uttered IN a theatre. the last section in quotations – the fruit of the incantation and herbs – the healing?
Yes the healing – I struggled with the end and then decided maybe this is his recovery poem. I’m glad it comes through
Amazing really. You are very talented. Keep it going!
Thank you Wendy!
Ah, the glimmer. So delicate but so there. Salvation in a handy carry home package.
I agree such a terrific piece of work.
Thanks so much K. Bruce!
No wise or crafty words here, only
Huzzah!! 💙🕯
I’ll take it, thanks Joseph!