Postcard
Summer 1961
Clinch Mountain
Little Tunnel Inn
Dear Bear,
I bought this postcard, real photograph.
Took all my quarter.
But you ain’t in it.
Freed you, I did, by side of Clinch Mountain,
purple in twilight’s embrace.
I, your witness wedged in family not mine,
watched the man rouse you with sharpen stick.
You stretched tall as me, brown snout open,
jaw popping.
Your coal-black fur rippled rage. Deep-throated
you pulsed threat.
The crowd held its breath. I held my tears.
You woofed my name.
I know cages, too.
Your friend, `
Pam
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I love the voice in this poem, Pam. And the turn is so powerful.
I agree with Nancy. Great descriptions and that ending hits strong
Pam – Love the form. Letters make great poems. “I know cages, too.” Fantastic line. Well done!
Many thanks, y’all. Appreciate your kind comments!
Thank you, Pam…I can see this, and feel the emotions of the speaker.
Glad to hear! I learned this postcard form from Pauletta. Helps to have a small container to fill with a difficult experience.
I like the voice in this letter-form.