Precipice
When there’s nothing left
to be done, and the soul
is poised for flight
and all you can do is hold
their hand as they make
the crossing, when
you stand together
at the precipice
of the whole damn
mystery, Ada Limón
knows when she says
you can hear its approach,
a creeping thing, a vine
growing close.
But there’s another sound
too, like an orchestra
tuning up in the pit,
the stories and jokes shared
around the bedside
to lighten the collective
grief. And even as the soul lifts
off, the conductor raises
his baton, commands
that sudden
charged silence, a reminder
to lift the instrument
again to the mouth,
for those of us
with symphonies
yet to play.
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Jasmine – Love the rhythm and energy of the poem. And Ada Limon!!! The ending just really sings!
Beautiful
Well done!
I love the way you use music references to describe emotion. Those last three stanzas are masterful!
Great title, Crisp and creates tension from the get go
Love this and love the ending!
This might be my very favorite of your poems, Jasmine. Such a meaty story, and love the form too.