Psalm of Enchantment 2
In the east-facing window
Slants the blue that colors my prayers
In this chapel, this box of silence.
Blue, blue, blue—
My prayers rise up to you in the blue
Which daily enchants me here.
Breath defines my space of silence,
Breath rescues mind from mazes,
Breath only opens…
Rustle of brown and grey:
The brothers come to raise more psalms
Than this which blossomed from blue—
We recite the ancient verses
Simply, side-by-side
Matching rhythms, caesuras as
The shadow-cross travels our wall
Where through the four-paned window
The unseen sun proclaims from blue.
My own blue silence rising up to you,
My own blue silence rising up to you.
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very nice.
…the unseen sun…
I think a really good book could come from these Psalms, Greg. Plus, I love that you use “caesuras” like breaths. And the refrain is lovely.
Thanks, Dustin and Roberta!
I remembered that friend used “caesura” as a book title. Kudos to our friend Pam Campbell for several good suggestions to revise my first draft!
This is a lovely piece of writing. It creates an entire atmosphere.
Agree with Roberta:love to see the book evolving. Thanks for the kind words, Greg. Glad to lend eyes. The words were there just needed a fresh pair of eyes to ask some questions!
Love all these lines but a special wow for:
Breath defines my space of silence,
Breath rescues mind from mazes,
Breath only opens…
and
My own blue silence rising up to you,
My own blue silence rising up to you.
I feel carried away in the peace of this.