Regarding the Birds After A Bad Dream
The melancholy finds me even in my sleep.
Distance gaps. An invisible wire connects us
from ragged point to wary point. We struggle
to connect in the untethered Age of Connectivity.
It’s strange.
All the birds chirping together sound like telephone static.
All the pain I overhear from strangers at the supermarket
sounds like my own, when I’m really listening.
On the drive back to my apartment, crackers for breakfast
and the sun peaks its way past suburban sprawl–
the birds don’t know how we feel. They rise and fall
in groups, land where they please. Who’s to say
exactly what they know?
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Fine poem, Shaun. Thank god for those birds, right?
Thanks, Kevin! Birds are definitely that constant presence and reminder that, hey, everything–even me–is nature. :p
I love your title. Your poem has a bit of a mysterious vibe. I love this little riff:
crackers for breakfast
and the sun peaks its way past suburban sprawl–
Thanks, Linda! I genuinely struggle titling things, so I appreciate that. And I enjoy playing with a little (or a lot!) of opaqueness in a poem that also feels at the same time confessional, if that anachronism makes sense.
Distance, connection, and perception. The melancholy vibe was the right choice in its effectiveness to tie in the aforementioned themes. You’re very observant, nice write!
Thank you for your kind words!
I like how this ends in a question about what birds know.
I think they probably know more than I do 😅
Well, I do love bird poems! You do a great job of overlapping sound — Maybe the world is all white noise? You bring up one of the main problems of our society – we are all connected by electronics yet we feel so alone and disconnected. Nice to read your work again, Shaun.
Thanks, Sylvia! I do love all of the noises–little signals.
Clearly I’m partial to our wing-ed friends, Your poem captures the undercurrent of chatter perfectly
Thanks so much. I think a lot about those mixed-species flocks that light around in the Spring and summer
Nicely done! The birds always surprise me – and they do know more than we might think. Today a blue jay and a mourning dove had a little spat flying between 2 trees by our porch – I never saw the likes of that before!
I’ve always heard Jay’s can be a little mean and territorial, but they look so pretty, I’m always willing to forgive their egresses :p
Really felt this bit – “when I’m really listening”. You do some wonderful listening, visualizing and writing here, Shaun. Thanks for sharing!
Thanks so much, Bill!
Provoking, and well done. This image is so real to me, and I bet others: “All the pain I overhear from strangers at the supermarket
sounds like my own”
Thanks!
Thanks, Allen. That line was a surprise when I wrote it, and it hit true for me.
This sits in the marrow of my bones.
That means so much, Samar. Thank you.
This conjures up feelings of grief for me about losses of human connection, and how sometimes the answers lie in nature. Beautifully done.
Thank you so much, Ondine!
What a great meditation on connectivity, pain, & the common aspects of the human experience!
Thank you, TM! The birds connect folks, too.
That opening line is exquisite!
Thank you, Ellen! I really appreciate that.