Rejection Letter
The citrus smell drifting over the fence
is from the neighbor’s mock orange bush,
a cultivar lab-tweaked to produce
the heady fragrance of orange
and jasmine blossom,
evoking sensual nights in the tropics,
colorful saris, musky incense,
which feels a far distance
from Louisville, Kentucky,
where I am rooted
struggling to write a poem,
the results never bearing the fruit I desire.
With the frustration comes the familiar
suspicion that mine are but poor imitations,
that the best I can hope for
is to trick the senses — a frippery,
plain-clothed mimic of what
I am not meant to be.
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i like the sense of here of feeling your way ‘through the hedge’
I love this poem.
I really love the way this month
Starts to do its work on us,
This is beautiful in a myriad of
skillfully sliced scents.
I can smell the desk too and the paper that cuts.
I feel your pain here Bill, but from over my fence you’re no trickster – you’re writing the real stuff!
Thanks, Julie. I really wasn’t fishing for compliments … but I’ll take them!
Bill your mock orange
is no fake
your sense of poetry
is for real
Thanks, Jim — was just trying to get my frustration out in a healthy way.
The poem belies the premise of the poet. It flowers.
I relate to this feeling (especially right now, I feel like my well is drying up trying to write every day!) but I agree that your poems are real! Also, I’ve always loved the word “frippery.”
Any day you can get frippery into a poem is a good day (for a poet).
Fun word, ain’t it?
I, too, love “frippery”
This poem is proving the anthesis of your statement 🙂 Just sayin’
I 100 percent agree with Mary!
You put out some exquisite frippery, Bill.
We fripsters need to stick together.
oh velveteen rabbit, santa is real and so are you – this is beautiful
I smell a real poem here! Acceptance letter!
Yeah, what others have already said. There’s such authenticity to articulating the struggle. And there’s so much beauty in entering a poem with a gorgeous image!
Thank you Ellen.