Remembering a Bipolar Lover
How delicate his touch, like the tender
barbs of a feather, despite
his constant mood swings, sharp
quills of his temper. He never
bunched his fist. No physical
impact. No bruises marbled
purple. One night
his lovemaking was so exquisite
I thought, In this realm
there’s nothing left to do
or feel. So wrong. We could not
stop the scorch & blister. Time
rolled over us like a tumble
weed in flames.
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i esp. love the line ‘rolled over us like a tumble’
the same way this powem tumbles down the page.
Yes ! “Time
rolled over us like a tumble
weed in flames”
That last stanza is a real gem. Love the tumbleweed, and the way you describe him, “tender barbs of a feather” and “quills of his temper.”
Your ability to condense narrative works so well here. I admire the strong tonal shift around the turn of this poem
some pretty memorable images: “a tumble / weed in flames,” “bruises marbled / purple”
NOW who’s Debbie Downer? 😏
Seriously, a high-impact yet economical poem. That last line is killer.
Laughing. I know! I actually have good memories and was trying to say it.
Loved the last stanza
It’s a beautiful bi-polar poem to match the lover! Wonderful images!
Agree with Sylvia! A bipolar poem!
Ok. I will tell you what Arwen told me not to say about this one, and the expurgated version.
Arwen censored: “So! Linda! Your friends have been telling stories about me again!”
Expurgated: Excellent enjambment, caught fire and smoldered in the mania, hardly a bipolar depression. Very satisfying.
Interesting memory of attraction.
Powerful ending!