Reminiscence
Replaying the day
in the creek
with the guy who told her
that country boys have sex
on horseback and yes,
in creeks
refreshing on a hot afternoon
when he taught her how
to use a chain-saw
both of them sweaty
and buggy, bandanas
across their brows
cutting down a truckload
of cedar saplings.
The day pulsed
with adventure
and stamina.
That was after her husband
had walked out.
By day’s end she knew:
I am going to do just fine.
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Love the turn this takes at the end and the confident note it ends on. Also like how “by day’s end” leaves open a lot of possibilities in that time that’s passed.
You captured this memory quite well with that turn at the end!
Yes, it’s all about the turn at the end. A fun and interesting poem. Good job!