Retribution
Crushed
stark
fear
dark.
Crouch
grip
cold
gun.
Stood-
heard
wood
creak.
Bang!
Mean
drunk
done.
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Crushed
stark
fear
dark.
Crouch
grip
cold
gun.
Stood-
heard
wood
creak.
Bang!
Mean
drunk
done.
You must be logged in to post a comment.
So much emotion and tension in few words. I enjoyed it.
Wow
Love
this
rhythmic
wonder
Yeah! Like smacking a snare
Thanks everyone. Asked a friend for a writing prompt and this was the result.