Revision
Thought I was clever
With my street cadence
And slang spelling
I can’t help but feel
A little silly
Inspect
Reject
Deconstruct
Rework
Quality measures
And constant revisions
If I don’t take the
Tinning off the wire
From all this heat
I may pass inspection
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I missed you all these weeks.I like it but Bukowsky would have considered it too romantic, but he was an awful poet.
The solder and the books and the hour drive sapped me of all that word juice.