Robin at Sunset
There’s something comforting about a robin who watches
the sun set while the rest of the forest sleeps.
She is transfixed by the melting day,
unaccompanied but content.
She proves the world
may still be
lovely in
solitude.
the sun set while the rest of the forest sleeps.
She is transfixed by the melting day,
unaccompanied but content.
She proves the world
may still be
lovely in
solitude.
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I really like what you’ve done with the line lengths, shorter and shorter until you land on solitude. So well done!
Thank you very much!😄
Very nice – I like how the form complements the poem!
Thank you!
I love the poem! Especially drawing inspiration from nature!
Thank you so much! It’s like what we were just discussing😉