Ropewalk
To Samuel Hawkins (ca 1830 – 1872)
I, Samuel, son of no one deemed
man enough to feature in your books,
factored more than met the eye.
Hemp weighing at the waist,
I stepped back, from the wheel
spinning, mechanics of a paradise lost to its winders.
Behold my raven, mother to an unkindness,
so readily dispersed at the altar
where gentlemen commerce and lust.
Now forsaken by workers bailing,
you lament at the shocks,
rotting past their dew.
Thirsty rakes broke free
slivers of fibers, weaving
their yearns into strands anew.
My work is done. Forgive-Me-Knots
are blooming in the land
of the thoroughly bred.
You pick the tree to exhibit
my bleeding body. Defiant to the last drop,
I remain your master roper.
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as usual Fanny, you bring me there as a witness, and ask me to listen to a man’s voice grappling with insult, tyranny, and being barely called human.
and this line murdered me “dispersed at the altar / where gentlemen commerce and lust”
powerful poem, and the title is perfect: I felt this in my stomach Fanny.
Powerful, indeed!
mother to an unkindness,
so readily dispersed at the altar
where gentlemen commerce and lust.
INCREDIBLE!
maybe the best thing
i’ve read here all month…
((top three for sure 🙂 ))
Yes, powerful!
Beautiful piece!
So well done, Fanny!