Ruth (more or less)
Shards of light shatter off the water
this summer Michigan morning,
sun slanting like an axe’s edge.
The girls rousing in the dawn, stirring,
the fishy breeze flowing from the West
and the promise of unfettered freedom.
J. isn’t home, but his boat keys dangle
from the iron hook, ready to Ruth’s hand,
and readily taken–the call sounded,
the five girls don their colored glasses
and take to the wood-paneled craft
hulking with muted speed and power.
Key turned, motor purring, bubbling water
rising from the propeller’s spin–
now they glide out, like a bold swan
cleaving the glassine surface, the
prow painting a silvered “V.” Ruth urges
the throttle forward, the rumble building
to a roar, the thin, triangular wake
swelling to waves: rows of soldiers,
an orderly force, invading the shore.
She laughs, the raw power of the boat
rising–the girls all grow heady,
overpowered with sun, water, and youth.
Objects abound like model train towns—
leafy willows dipping, fishermen
drifting, buoys and rafts floating—
only a frame to the urgent motion
of this boat now carving circles that
cut the freshly incarnated wake in half
and the circles, the spinning, becomes
an intoxicating challenge to beat back
the wind and–slicing–capture the past.
Past Orr’s Point, spiraling, the speed
increasing, the prow lifting to the sun
the motor stampeding into the light.
And then, a crunch, crash, and crumbling:
this steed bucking and twisting suddenly:
Ruth cuts the motor, the prow now flaccid.
Looking back, there is a cartoon scene:
one old man clinging to a rowboat, fishing
poles sinking, an oar outstretched toward
another venerable gentleman, eyes
full of fear and fire, grasping the blade,
pulled inchingly, achingly into the boat,
blood boiling up behind him, staining the
greenish-blue water with red, the three
primary colors that make white and
in this he moves toward the light, the
lifeblood ebbing from his leg, which
the propeller, those cast bronze blades,
nearly amputated. This man–who only
expected to catch fish and bullshit with
his friend–succumbed to the void.
Where did we stray?
Who will pay?
What is the reason?
Whence this season?
Why did it shatter?
Does it matter
that she is twenty-four?
Is she more or less ruthless or an
arrow shot by fate to bring him home?
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Wow! I wasn’t sure where this was going at first. The imagery towards the end was fantastic.
Whoa!! Unexpected turn of events, but this poem kept me in its grip the whole way through. Great job showing instead of telling — that horrified feeling it gives and the image of the man’s nearly-severed leg is powerfully rendered. Amazing work.
I love the deep story you weaved here
wow, what a turn and story.