Saturday at the YMCA
The hearse cruises by
as I lift five-pound weights
at the High Street Y
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The hearse cruises by
as I lift five-pound weights
at the High Street Y
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love it
wow! Love this!
You are the master of Japanese verse. Even the 5,6,5 syllables do not suggest anything but perfection.
Oh my already in contention for my favorite of the month.
I always look forward to reading your poems on LexPoMo. Sorry we missed talking with you on Wednesday. When things were over, we saw that you were gone. God Bless!
Made me smile!
Gaby – The normalcy of the scene and situation give tension to the deeper message. Nicely done!
I enjoyed hearing you read the other night at Carnegie!
Death is as much an everyday event as working out at the gym. Until it touches you. Three thought-provoking lines.