Saudade
In husky alto,
I unleash a melody
so bittersweet, the crowd
doesn’t dare breathe
until the first line ends.
My longing hangs like smoke
above the tables,
the rhythm
sways, hypnotic,
silken. So too,
my hips,
charmed like
a snake into
motion.
I hold this song
like a lover, as if
to make it part of me.
I want to become
sound, color, texture.
Guitar notes run up
and down their spines
and mine. Fingers
drum the beat on knees,
their drinks clink
like empty glass hearts
that ache to be filled
once again.
Our lungs hold the air
the trumpeter needs
for his next phrase, my eyes
close as he begins to play….
3 thoughts on "Saudade"
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Lovely end
Love the way you capture sound
Great mood
Love the movement in the second stanza – it’s really effective!! This poem is steamy, smoky, melancholy, sensual – I feel it all!
This poem was a great love of mine when you first showed it as I had a tangle with the word Saudade a week or so before you sent this poem. I ended up coming up with nothing myself but was so excited to see someone else had used the word that I had neglected because it is neat, but I digress. I think this poem is a great demonstration of your increasing confidence with line breaks (and the rhythm you can coincidentally create with them).