Settling Down
I grew tired of counting places,
leaving town a year too late. I’ve settled
now where the slow twining creek is clay
brown & ripples through the wildwood
like a wedding train. I grew tired
of counting places & so I turned to
stable shelter, prayed to tame my gypsy
course. I marked the proper names, studied
the bottom of the slow twining creek.
Burrowing mayfly, speckled hellbender.
Alabama cavefish. In water, how their lacy-jelled
eggs trembled. I counted their places under
river rock & branch. Dreaming, grit-brown
water rolled over me like a wand
& in the slow twining creek I transformed
to slick-shelled mussels. Nudged
by dust & gravel bits, cradled by mud,
I spit pearls from trouble & count my place
in the slow twining creek & its slack embrace
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Such a sense of yearning & beautiful imagery:
“where the slow twining creek is clay
brown & ripples through the wildwood
like a wedding train.”
& “how their lacy-jelled
eggs trembled.”
& “slick-shelled mussels. Nudged
by dust” (lovely sounds)
universal solvent-
water grinds
our bones to sand
i love how this hovers above our current sense of ‘time’
so sun in sight to count, or mark the days or years..
just a pile pearls..
I spit pearls from trouble. <3 Love it.
Beautiful details and music here. Love it.
That concluding couplet is a gem. The whole piece is filled with such rich imagery and soft sounds. Wonderful.
My favorite image among many: “In water, how their lacy-jelled/ eggs trembled.”
So many great moments here but I loved “I spit pearls from trouble”
Yes !!!
I love the repetition of the “slow twining creek”. It’s placed perfectly throughout.
water rolled over me like a wand
its slack embrace
Keep spitting pearls, Linda!
So many wonderful images! Beautifully written!
there a something so comforting about the way you play aikido-judo-jujitsu with calamity, matching it with serenity in this poem.
Such beauty can come from creek sediment- wonderful
Love the details that really bring this place alive.