Silhouettes
Moon tumbles over waterfall
briefly held by branch and canary/
marmalade/mottled leaves.
Their fluttering down
precedes the slow slick
slide of orb
from tree grasp
to roiling waves and foam.
Yet moon never bounces
but scuds across water
as caps cut into it
soften it with froth
and swarthy swans
take a bite from it
with their silhouettes.
~inspired by Hiroshige’s paining “Moon over a Waterfall”
Here’s a link to the painting itself if you are interested: https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=2057223731192321&set=gm.797068554014860&type=3&theater
9 thoughts on "Silhouettes"
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This is suck a beautiful Ekphrastic poem! I absolutely see this poem as it is portrayed here! No need to go to the work of art to feel the gentle fire of this poem.
Obviously I didnt speak clearly enough for my phone to gather exactly what I meant. . . Lolol. . .this poem is SUCH a beautiful poem!
Thank you, Violett! Glad you liked it.
I really enjoy the swarthy swans taking a bite from the moon with their silhouettes. Nicely done! 🙂
Thank you very much, Jennifer!
Stunning poem! Those swans taking bites out of the moon…is an amazing image.
Thanks, Karen!
Beautiful poem. The verbs are especially strong!
Thank you, Nancy!