Sisters, Performing a Scene
Facing each other,
the five-year-old
in her pink pajamas,
the eight-year-old
in her Disney Princesses t-shirt,
the one with blond-brown straight hair
from her dada, the other with dark curls
from her mama, the one looks up,
the other looks down.
They are Spring and Fall
in a play they wrote. The one bends
to whisper to the other,
they each speak, then grasp hands,
then say the last line
together—“I like you,
let’s be best friends”—
and the universe smiles.
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“… The one bends
to whisper to the other,
they each speak, then grasp hands,
then say the last line
together …”
Along with the wonderfully descriptive writing at the start, these lines brought me deep into the story of the poem.
Kevin
Thanks, Kevin — I appreciate your careful reading.
Spring and Fall, best friends! The simple optimism of young girls! You have captured that in this happy poem!
Thanks, Kathleen — yes, they were their characters and also themselves.
children always seem to be performing…they’re Naturals
Usually unself-conscious, too — I love that.