Six Months Ago
these chimes
sound
in gentle wind
fierce with
funereal memory
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these chimes
sound
in gentle wind
fierce with
funereal memory
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I like how you portray the abstract memory as being more fierce than the gentleness of the physical chimes.
What Sylvia said! I enjoyed this one
I really enjoyed how compressed and complete this poem is
My mother received some lovely chimes when my father died. They bring her gentle joy.
Well done.
like how you flip this and add such emotional depth