Sketchy Beginnings
Oftentimes
Poems arrive in a sketch form in my head
and act like little newly hatched birds with no feathers, half-blind
rolling in the nest..seeking and sensing
even though not fully formed
On arrival
a poetic sketch sometimes makes me run out into the yard
with a big shovel and start digging for something
deep in the dirt —better words—-the right words
maybe something I just sense is there —
but I must get at it while the idea is still breathing
—still sparking within —
though making me breathe a different way,
semi-gasping through the dirt clouds forming
After digging a while
When I look down I see myself
looking up clawing my way out
I meet myself there in the dark, nod,
and see that I have just gone far enough
having hit a vein of gold to buy myself some time
I stay behind to bury the words that perished along the way
Then run away with an armload of possibles
seeking a cave of solitude
where I throw spaghetti against the wall until some sticks
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I love your description of poems as ” little newly hatched birds with no feathers”
thanks for reading and commenting–so glad you liked that idea.
I appreciate the complexity of this journey. Too true.
Thanks so much for reading and relating to the process. Thanks for your comment.
Wow Ann, the articulation of the inner and outer journey of birthing a piece is authentically supreme, thank you!
Thanks so much for reading and for your comments Darlene…I really appreciate your gleanings. Thanks!