Sonnet
Loving our wayward daughter is riding the bus
through red lights at busy, unrhymed intersections
at ninety miles per hour and up, up, up
over a hill past broken-down Chevrolets,
veering into a dawn that unlocks the sun,
and past the wedding of automobile and deer,
of fist and face. Rubbernecking with reluctant eyes.
Oh! acceleration the speed of love breaking
the sound barrier and all other barriers! Oh wife!
When listening to stars colliding, can you hear
the screaming and honking of the spheres?
Can you smell the way the rubber burns
as we speed, reckless, past rained-out ruins
speechless but for an alphabet of nerves?
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What a beautiful intimate sonnet.
Thank you!
Impressive compression & density here.
Thanks Kevin.
I adore this phrase — past the wedding of automobile and deer. The poem sings.
So nice of you to say!
Wow! This is a powerful piece much appreciated by this nail-biting parent of adult children.
I appreciate the encouragement, Nancy.
Tom – I felt the journey and worry in your words! Love “the speed of love breaking/the sound barrier” and “speechless but for an alphabet of nerves.” The poem has a breakneck acceleration to it!
You’re a generous reader, Sylvia.
I really enjoyed your lines here, especially “Oh! acceleration the speed of love breaking”
Thanks!
I love “listening to stars colliding” and “veering into a dawn that unlocks the sun,” Excellent work!
Thanks for that.