spider crawl*
living in nowhere zen
time flabbergasted by itself
refuses to behave
my brain is a tv screen
surrounded by kaleidoscopes
going nowhere
emerging from lockdown
like a monster in cyberspace
word brain whispers to the dark
* I am playing with a new form in which each line contains a random word from the preceding line, like a spider crawling around the bathroom sink, trying not to be sucked down the drain. I find the process and surprising results to be therapeutic.
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I like your new form. It’s very subtle but revealing. My favorite verse is:
my brain is a tv screen
surrounded by kaleidoscopes
going nowhere
I love the line ‘like a monster in cyberspace’.
Will give this form you do a try!
Favorite line:
word brain whispers to the dark
Thanks.
I hope you enjoy trying it.
Thanks.
I hope you enjoy trying it.
Cool idea! Interesting!