Springtime Treasure
Each year I admire her peonies,
the lady around the corner who stops
us now on our evening jaunt – boys
pedaling bikes, my husband and I
trailing on foot with the dog.
Tonight they are still buds,
fat green fists on the cusp of losing
their grip around pink petals
aching to burst from within. But the bed
beside them, she says, holds a nest.
Beneath a peeled-back clump of dirt
and dead leaf hide three baby bunnies
tucked together tight, one soft mass
of umber fur and astonished eyes
blinking wide in the stark new light.
7 thoughts on "Springtime Treasure"
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Wow I just adore those “fat green fists” that are losing their grip. Reminds me of those boys on bikes who are pulling away from their parents. Such a great scene, Chelsie. Love it.
Chelsie, this kill me. Immediacy of haiku, flowers, bud bunnies astonished. Love that word, astonished. I really think this needs more hyphen.
This is such a maternal poem. Well crafted, and brimming with a rush from your heart. great, Chelsie.
Delightful, Chelsie! Love the content — my god, those bunnies! — and the economy and confidence of the lines. You are growing like a peony.
I can just feel those babies in the last stanza!
I love how clearly you write about nature and then the end leaves me feeling “astonished,” “eyes blinking wide”
Wow! Loved: “fat green fists on the cusp of losing/ their grip around pink petals”