Stargazer Without a Star
Empty words hang between us
like the ghosts of countless stars
simply falling out of existence.
My words will never touch them,
your ears would never catch them,
they become the vacuum between us
where a spark can never be.
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Absolutely beautiful!
Agreed, beautiful
Thank you both so much!
Wow. I feel the void and black hole here. Excellent.
Absolutely brilliant “like the ghosts of countless stars” left me breathless.
one of those poems that I study so I can learn how to write
The power of 40 words arranged so well that memories of times past and lost forever encounters flood my mind with “ If only I had known then what I know now”. Excellent!!!
This is wonderful!