Stellar Dash
A long slash
across the sky, incom-
plete thought, signatory line
scribed thorugh the ether so
fast it’s gone before the air of
there! is finished, a friction so
sudden it might be fiction. You
have to ask yourself if you really
saw it, that instantaneous burn that
seared itself onto your retina, the start
of it gone even as the end is fast fading.
And all of this from the mote trailing
that cometary chunk of lumpen ice
which passed this way some two
millennia past, its long slow
slog through the heavens.
6 thoughts on "Stellar Dash"
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Your poem–love your use of form–makes me think about shooting stars as I never have before.
Oh wow! The form is fantastic! Love the poem!
The form and content work together to make me dash through the poem!
great form-I like the way “cometary chunk of lumpen ice” slows us down a little to “slog through the heavens.”
Brigit – Great form – love the break for incom-plete! Also “a friction so/sudden it might be fiction” and “slow slog.” Stellar Dash is a winner!
thanks all for taking the time to read and comment! It really fuels me to write more! It’s so great to have a “virtual” writing group, even for just one month!