Still
in the purgatory between wakefulness and sleep i feel your body pressed ever so gently against mine
early morning light casting shadows across our tangled mess of limbs
peace looks especially good on you
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peaceful moment captured here
I adore this ending line.
The title has a lot of layers. Nice build to a beautiful ending!
Oh this is lovely.
Once again, so honest and unique!
Seeing that you are going for a theme this year, yesterday’s poem going into this poem is a wonderful turn. As readers, we join you in the anything-can-happen anticipation of ‘Swell’ and experience the full payoff of peacefulness here in ‘Still.’ Very good entries in an already solid set of poems.
Thank you so much for the kind words! Even if the subject matter is heavy at times I’m enjoying where the inspiration is taking me